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    Posted: 12 May 2018 at 3:30pm
Hi everyone, I've put together a preview/profile on Clayton Blommetjies for anyone who's interested:


This is my first article so any feedback positive or negative is appreciated 

diolch yn fawr 
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (0) Thanks(0)   Quote Cymroircarn9 Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 May 2018 at 3:30pm
I also appreciate I've nicked the name of this forum for the blog - it's a working title so can change it if necessary Big smile
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Post Options Post Options   Thanks (1) Thanks(1)   Quote Speedy Quote  Post ReplyReply Direct Link To This Post Posted: 12 May 2018 at 6:59pm
Very good. One small little thing, you have obviously worked hard in preparing such an in depth analysis, I felt you spoilt that by using terms like "this guy" "that guy" etc. Sounds better if you use more technical terms that match your effort in the rest of the blog. Maybe "defender" it sounds more polished then. 

You certainly have the groundings of a very well prepared and laid out blog there. 
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Thanks Speedy appreciate that mate Thumbs Up
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