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Clayton Blommetjies Player Profile

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Topic: Clayton Blommetjies Player Profile
Posted By: Cymroircarn9
Subject: Clayton Blommetjies Player Profile
Date Posted: 12 May 2018 at 3:30pm
Hi everyone, I've put together a preview/profile on Clayton Blommetjies for anyone who's interested:

https://scarletfever72.wixsite.com/scarletfever72/clayton-blommetjies-player-profile" rel="nofollow - https://scarletfever72.wixsite.com/scarletfever72/clayton-blommetjies-player-profile

This is my first article so any feedback positive or negative is appreciated 

diolch yn fawr 



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Posted By: Cymroircarn9
Date Posted: 12 May 2018 at 3:30pm
I also appreciate I've nicked the name of this forum for the blog - it's a working title so can change it if necessary Big smile


Posted By: Speedy
Date Posted: 12 May 2018 at 6:59pm
Very good. One small little thing, you have obviously worked hard in preparing such an in depth analysis, I felt you spoilt that by using terms like "this guy" "that guy" etc. Sounds better if you use more technical terms that match your effort in the rest of the blog. Maybe "defender" it sounds more polished then. 

You certainly have the groundings of a very well prepared and laid out blog there. 


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Posted By: Cymroircarn9
Date Posted: 12 May 2018 at 9:30pm
Thanks Speedy appreciate that mate Thumbs Up



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