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Chesswithdeath
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Topic: Ursa’s Blog article 1st draftPosted: 27 April 2006 at 3:59pm |
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any thoughts additions?
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up for the Scarlets
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Nikostratos
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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 1:40am |
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That's great, Gar. I think that calling the opponents' strategy
"fag packet" is being rather kind; it implies that there is one [poor]
strategy instead of a patchwork of half a dozen or more, all equally
half-baked. I don't think it needs changing, though.
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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 10:03am |
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Thanks Bob, have tweaked it a bit again..
How about this for the actual petition heading? Feel free to edit etc. Not exactly sure who to 'aim' it at, the Council or the Assembly? "We the undersigned urge those concerned to support the proposed redevelopment of Stradey Park as outlined by the joint venture between the Llanelli Scarlets and ***??. As a vital part of the proposed new stadium development at Trostre, we believe that this development is pivotal to the survival of more than just a rugby region, but a focal point in the sporting and cultural life of our community. We therefore urge you to support these proposals." Edited by ursamajor |
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